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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Sylvia’s poem is deep, surreal, and full of rich symbolism.

The vibes i got were a mix of Lucid dreams, fever dreams, and a nature séance.

The audio was a delightful feast to the senses as always. My ADHD brain could listen to it all day.

Never stop writing 💜

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Well my dear friend, I have to give you so much credit. I’ve come back to your poem a few times to read and consider it and I’m fascinated with how you took the idea of becoming internally and existentially questioning while mine is more outward and embracing of the questions you pose and there is the then the exploring…both in uncertain and disoriented ways, both of transformative nature. I’m am continually in awe of your writing finesse and skill. This is such an honour for me to participate in this with you. 💖

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Oh yay!!! This is soooo good!!! I love how you made Becoming feel foreign and surreal in emotion! Two sorts of duality going on, in essence!!! This was such a fun project for me. Perhaps my favourite to date even! Thank you for bringing me into your creative sphere and allowing me to venture into new creatively layered realms. I think this project is absolutely brilliant @the forgotten muse 💖🌞

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Thank you so much. Feel free to jump on the duality train anytime. You’re always welcome here 💜

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

I loved this. Beautiful

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you Maddie!

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Thanks hun

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Samantha Lazar's avatar

Amazing collaboration!! Both pieces were otherworldly.

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you Samantha! Otherworldly is a very appreciated compliment. 🌞💖

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Thank you so much 💜✨

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Hera's avatar

I love the idea of your skin no longer being able to contain you

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Thank you

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Diary of the Unpoet's avatar

I loved both of these, especially the spoken reading! Becoming drummed up such anticipation, and of what will I become? Sylvia’s feels one with my own memories. Beautiful work.

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

I love that you can connect with my words (and actual memories, too) reminiscing back to your very own memories! I think we, as creatives, sometimes have so much in common and it’s through words these commonalities find ground to stand on hand in hand together. Thank you for your comments and for sitting with us to enjoy our offerings. 🌞

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Thank you so much 💜

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Aster solenne's avatar

💖

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